Can anyone tell me how this essay sounds so far?

Read the play too long ago, but, are you actually answering the question? How has the accuser been harmed, seemed to have gained so far, so perhaps you'll need to explain this, and find more evidence of how they have been harmed by their accusations. What you say is quite good, a bit bitsy and you need to make your reflections better substantiated. Stick to the topic, or no matter how well you say something, it won't score.